Zelda

[happymediocrity]

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2510017/1/Zelda

Above is the link to whatever I've completed in my young adult novel, tentatively titled Zelda.

If some of my wonderful writer friends could give me some feedback on my characterization, since that's all I have to show for at the moment, and any ideas they may have for the plot of my book. Also, I'm afraid my summary makes it sound really bad.

Btw, I've been working on this project for at least four months. I have about 10 pages total to show for it. That fucking sucks.

So, yeah, I'd appreciate feedback.

Comments

[nochick-fics.livejournal.com]

Will check this out tomorrow; I'm not really coherent enough right now.

I'm sure it's wonderful. It's written by you, after all.

<3

[happymediocrity.livejournal.com]

thank you!

[animanga-maniac.livejournal.com]

I'm biased. a) because I adore you and b) because I am an uber-closeted young adult fan. That said, I like this story alot.

But. I know you actually want something more constructive than that, so I'll sit down and write something other than my adoring gush tomorrow.

More importantly though: how do YOU feel about what you've written? I know that sounds like such a reverse-psychology thing to say, but I really do want to know where it stands with you. So indulge me.

[happymediocrity.livejournal.com]

I like what I've written, but I worry that it won't sound natural or real.